- Issue created by @RobbyMo
- ๐ฎ๐นItaly apaderno Brescia, ๐ฎ๐น
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- Status changed to Needs work
about 1 year ago 7:15am 12 October 2023 - ๐ฎ๐นItaly apaderno Brescia, ๐ฎ๐น
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sharepoint_connector.info.yml
core_version_requirement: ^8 || ^9 || ^10
Drupal releases before Drupal 8.7.7 do not recognize the
core_version_requirement
property.^8
needs to be replaced with^8.8
./src/Controller/SharepointController.php
if ($is_logging) { \Drupal::logger('sharepoint_connector')->error("An error occurred while posting to SharePoint: @error", ['@error' => $e->getMessage()]); }
Dependencies must be injected with the DI container.
To log exceptions, there is thewatchdog_exception()
function, or the OO code that function uses.src/Controller/SharepointControllerTabs.php
/** * Form builder object via Dependency Injection. * * @var \Drupal\Core\Form\FormBuilderInterface */ protected $formBuilder;
That property is already defined from the parent class. There is no need to redefine it.
/** * {@inheritdoc} */ public function __construct(FormBuilderInterface $form_builder) { $this->formBuilder = $form_builder; }
The documentation comment for constructors is not mandatory anymore, If it is given, the description must be Constructs a new [class name] object. where [class name] includes the class namespace.
public function page1() { return [ 'form' => $this->formBuilder->getForm('Drupal\sharepoint_connector\Form\SharepointConnectorForm'), ]; }
There is no need to use that code, when the method of a form class can be directly used in a route definition.
/src/Form/SharepointConnectorForm.php
/** * Config Factory object via Dependency Injection. * * @var \Drupal\Core\Config\ConfigFactoryInterface */ protected $config;
That property is not used from the class.
$sharepoint_config = $this->configFactory->get('sharepoint_connector.settings');
Classes that extend
ConfigFormBase
use$this->config()
to get a configuration object./src/SharepointConnector.php
/** * GuzzleHTTP Client. * * @var string */ public $client = '';
Either it is a
GuzzleHttp\Client
object or a string.That class should rather be used for a service.
/sharepoint_connector.module
if ($is_logging) { \Drupal::logger('sharepoint_connector')->info("SUCCESS! Created new entry in sharepoint with the following info: <pre>" . print_r($send_array, TRUE) . "</pre>"); }
The first argument for info() must be a literal string, not a string concatenation.
- Status changed to Needs review
about 1 year ago 3:04am 13 October 2023 - ๐บ๐ธUnited States RobbyMo
Thank you for the feedback. These items have all been updated in the 1.0.x-dev branch.
- ๐ฒ๐ฉMoldova andrei.vesterli Chisinau
Hi @RobbyMo
I love this module a lot and bit thx for your contribution to the Drupal world! Here are some comments I will leave related to your solution.
- It's recommended to add the hook _help in the .module file as it's missing
- I will also recommend to move these functions
_sharepoint_connector_process_node_fields
,_sharepoint_connector_get_field_value
,_sharepoint_connector_get_disabled_api
into the service somewhere. If there is logic from the SharePoint connector, it's better to keep it within the service - I see this use
Drupal\webform\WebformSubmissionInterface
in the .module file which means, you use the webform module as a dependency. Please, add this dependency in the .info.yml file - Missing the
composer.json
file. You need it in order to set a requirement for the PHP version and also the required dependencies, for instance, to requiredrupal/webform
- Once you have the form with the config
sharepoint_connector.settings
, you need to add the default config into the config/install/*. Also, add the schema definition too. Same for the otherssharepoint_connector_settings_types_form
,sharepoint_connector_settings_form_fields
,sharepoint_connector_settings_form_webform_fields
,sharepoint_connector_settings_webforms_form
- It's good that you have this service
SharepointConnector
and you can also add those mentioned functions from the .mnodule file here. As a recommendation please, add the interface definition for it.
- Status changed to Needs work
about 1 year ago 8:53pm 7 November 2023 - ๐บ๐ธUnited States RobbyMo
Thank you for the feedback. These items have all been addressed in the 1.0.x-dev branch.
- Status changed to Needs review
about 1 year ago 6:59pm 5 December 2023 - Status changed to Needs work
about 1 year ago 8:14pm 5 December 2023 - ๐ฎ๐นItaly apaderno Brescia, ๐ฎ๐น
src/Form/SharepointConnectorForm.php
$type_default = (isset($connection_defaults[$this->getFormId() . '_connection_type']) && !empty($connection_defaults[$this->getFormId() . '_connection_type'])) ? $connection_defaults[$this->getFormId() . '_connection_type'] : ''; $form['connection_fieldset'][$this->getFormId() . '_connection_type'] = [ '#type' => 'select', '#title' => $this->t('Connection Type'), '#options' => [ 'client_tenant_id' => $this->t('Client/Tenant ID'), ], '#description' => $this->t('Select the type of connection you would like to use to connect to Sharepoint.'), '#default_value' => $type_default, ]; $disabled_default = (isset($connection_defaults[$this->getFormId() . '_disable_api']) && !empty($connection_defaults[$this->getFormId() . '_disable_api'])) ? $connection_defaults[$this->getFormId() . '_disable_api'] : ''; $form['connection_fieldset'][$this->getFormId() . '_disable_api'] = [ '#type' => 'checkbox', '#title' => $this->t('Disable all calls to Sharepoint'), '#description' => $this->t('Killswitch - disable Sharepoint API connections entirely.'), '#default_value' => $disabled_default, '#prefix' => '<span style="line-height: 5px;"> </span>', ]; $log_default = (isset($connection_defaults[$this->getFormId() . '_log_requests']) && !empty($connection_defaults[$this->getFormId() . '_log_requests'])) ? $connection_defaults[$this->getFormId() . '_log_requests'] : ''; $form['connection_fieldset'][$this->getFormId() . '_log_requests'] = [ '#type' => 'checkbox', '#title' => $this->t('Log requests'), '#description' => $this->t('Log all Sharepoint requests and responses.'), '#default_value' => $log_default, ];
Why is the form ID added to each form element name? Inside the form, those form element names are already unique.
$this->config('sharepoint_connector.settings') ->set('connection_fieldset', $form_state->getValue('connection_fieldset')) ->set('keys_fieldset', $form_state->getValue('keys_fieldset')) ->set('host_fieldset', $form_state->getValue('host_fieldset')) ->save();
$form_state->getValue()
does not return values for fieldsets. (Fieldsets are render elements, not form elements. They cannot be used to submit values.)
You need to call$form_state->getValue()
for each of the form elements.$form['keys_fieldset'][$this->getFormId() . '_client_id']['#default_value'] = ''; $form['keys_fieldset'][$this->getFormId() . '_client_id']['#disabled'] = TRUE; $form['keys_fieldset'][$this->getFormId() . '_client_id']['#description'] = $form['keys_fieldset'][$this->getFormId() . '_client_id']['#description'] . ' (Overriden by settings.php)';
Form element descriptions must be translatable strings. That is valid also for strings added to existing descriptions.
src/Form/SharepointConnectorFormContentTypes.php
SharepointConnectorFormContentTypes
does not have anysubmitForm()
method, which means no value will be saved. If the purpose of the class is only showing values or links, it should not extendConfigFormBase
.src/Access/WebformModuleCheck.php
/** * Checks access to the Webforms tab. * * @param \Symfony\Component\Routing\Route $route * The route to check against. * * @return \Drupal\Core\Access\AccessResultAllowed|\Drupal\Core\Access\AccessResultForbidden * The access result. */ public function access(Route $route) { return ($this->moduleHandler->moduleExists('webform')) ? AccessResult::allowed() : AccessResult::forbidden(); }
Methods defined in a parent class or in an interface just need
{@inheritDoc}
as documentation comment.A few notes more:
- The short description for class constructors is Constructs a new [class name] object. not Constructor. Long descriptions are not used for constructors.
- There is no need to add via Dependency Injection to property descriptions, nor specify it contains an object. The request stack. is a sufficient description, for example.
- Status changed to Needs review
about 1 year ago 6:52pm 19 December 2023 - ๐บ๐ธUnited States RobbyMo
Thank you for the feedback. These items have all been addressed in the 1.0.x-dev branch. I noticed phpcs flagged the constructor short descriptions for being longer than 80 characters due to the class namespaces but from https://www.drupal.org/docs/develop/standards/php/php-coding-standards โ it mentions "Lines containing longer function names, function/class definitions, variable declarations, etc are allowed to exceed 80 characters." so I assume that it's fine. Please let me know if there are any issues.
- ๐ฎ๐นItaly apaderno Brescia, ๐ฎ๐น
Yes, the limit of 80 characters is not strict on those cases, especially when the full (namespaced) class name is expected.
- Status changed to Needs work
11 months ago 10:50am 5 February 2024 - ๐ช๐ธSpain alvar0hurtad0 Cรกceres
I see this as a security issue:
https://git.drupalcode.org/project/sharepoint_connector/-/blob/1.0.x/src...
public function access(Route $route) { return ($this->moduleHandler->moduleExists('webform')) ? AccessResult::allowed() : AccessResult::forbidden(); }
In my eyes we should compliment with a permission or provide a neutral result in order to allow other existing permissions to return a forbidden if the user should not access to the route. Also the webform module is a dependency in in the info.yml file, so it seems like this access check is always true.
- ๐บ๐ธUnited States RobbyMo
Thank you for the feedback. This item has been removed in the 1.0.x-dev branch as it is no longer necessary as the webform module is now a dependency as you mentioned. I will be looking to make this optional again in the near future and will incorporate in your suggestions. For my education would you be able to elaborate on why this is considered a security issue?
Also do you know at what point the module is deemed RTBC? Is it time based (X days without someone finding an issue) or does someone specific needs to do a specific validation or is there different criteria? Just wondering since we're looking to add in additional functionality but per the submission guidelines until this gets approved I am the only one who can make code updates to the project. Thanks!
- Status changed to Needs review
11 months ago 3:17pm 6 February 2024 - Assigned to apaderno
- Status changed to RTBC
10 months ago 3:31pm 18 February 2024 - ๐ฎ๐นItaly apaderno Brescia, ๐ฎ๐น
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- Status changed to Fixed
10 months ago 3:31pm 18 February 2024 Automatically closed - issue fixed for 2 weeks with no activity.