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- π¬π§United Kingdom pdjohnson Manchester
Blog post drafted. Ready for review.
- πΊπΈUnited States Kristen Pol Santa Cruz, CA, USA
Thanks for the draft :)
I did a quick review, and suggest I do another round after tweaks are done.
In general, there are quite a number of long sentences that could be simplified and/or broken up.
- π¬π§United Kingdom pdjohnson Manchester
Worked on the content, taken on your suggestions. Please review. You are more than welcome to make any direct changes, I am time poor and have lots else to get done.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oxpDBEapUytkwVDGkVOrPA7ZTKXXSCmLQphh...
- πΊπΈUnited States Kristen Pol Santa Cruz, CA, USA
Thanks. Iβm time poor too π
- π©πͺGermany baddysonja Frankfurt am Main
kristen pol β credited baddysonja β .
- πΊπΈUnited States Kristen Pol Santa Cruz, CA, USA
Okay... I went over it pretty carefully. I made some tweaks which I did without suggestions and they didn't change any of the meaning of what was written.
There are only a small number of comments left which one requires buy-in from Dominique (the monetary amount tied to each FTE for the calculation).
The rest are ones that you can close off IMO.
Thanks!
- π¬π§United Kingdom pdjohnson Manchester
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